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ÚLTIMO VEZ


Both the friends sat beneath the tree
Putting hands on hands, talking to the breeze.

Talked about the way they walked
In the friendship that made them tired. 

Pained others’ hearts with deep cuts
But bled the friendship deeply hurt.

The bitter cry of heart made them laugh together,
May their friendship last in dreams forever.

The breeze blew, the sun glowed and flowers woke when the friendship came to an end. The way that the two friends Ultimo and Vez walked was not too long but rather too deep. This depth can only be attained in dreams but not was expected to break like the journey to a La La Land.
Both walked down the street to Ultimo’s house, touched with a bit of nostalgia their tears were speaking, remembering the sweet memories and they were dumbstruck with the grief of separation. In front of the house of Ultimo Vez waved his hands. They had them party at night and got back to their houses.
The next day everything was as usual, but there wasn’t the friendly yet a bullish touch to wake up Vez. Neither nonsense chats nor the bad jokes did entertain. Life advanced and Vez often lingered around that tree, sat under it and wept bitterly, eyes seeking one glimpse of Ultimo went thirsty. To quench his thirst he was memorising those previous words uttered by Ultimo, which ordered “Never again dare to come here because…                                                                                                                   

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  1. Css.27 April 2019 at 23:01

    Hey Sasai, your writing is so cool!, I can think two things:

    1st. You are a cretive person, many ideas and a great vocabulary to explain.
    2nd. It is so interesthing talk concerning this topic, the poems and more.

    Well, good thoughts, I am impressed!
    P.D: I am from Tandem ("Css"), you know, the application about languages. Greetings!

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