And he
broke up. He was sitting under the same tree and his eyes fell on Ultimo. One
glimpse of his friend painted the town red. He sprung explosively with an outburst
of happiness and called out “El it's me, Vez”. But these badges of happiness shrunk
into the hole of grief as Ultimo moved down without replying. Vez started
chasing him. And suddenly, he fell into a pit.
Vez got
wounded. He hurt himself on his head and was lying barely alive His eyes closed
gently. Besides his eyelids, sighted the glimmer of his smile and reminded him
of an incident.
Long ago,
in the initial days of matricula, the mad duo while riding through a rasp, Vez’s
toe was stuck inside the spoke of a bike and was badly hurt. The blood
dripping from the toe terrified Ultimo. He tried his best to mend it. He aided
the toe. The day was about to break and they walked the way to Vez’s home. As
cycling proved to be more harmful to Vez, he preferred to walk. The next day with the first speak of hen Ultimo came to meet Vez. He asked Vez to come to matricula. But
the previous day’s pain was enough to make him bedridden as he had to walk rest
of the way. But Ultimo took a deep breath and picked him up, and carried him on
his shoulders. And he anyhow managed to pick Vez for the matricula. It was
later when he came to know about the wounded shoulder of Ultimo. A tear dropped
down his cheek slowly but with an amiable touch. Ultimo was not able to complete
a day without him and his demands now contradicted his heart’s speaks!
The tear
was wiped by someone. Vez when opened
his eyes saw………
-Sasai Chandra Kumar
Very creative
ReplyDeleteTerrific fragmentation of words with a beautiful storyline. You gonna rock the world soon. How beautifully you have rebuild the story is amazing..
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DeleteVery good composition.. effective wordings.. Splendid job. Boy. # ❤️ Manoj sir
ReplyDeleteCongrats Sasi!, it was so incredible, the history goin to happen good!!, keep up and don´t leave your creativity and talent!
ReplyDeleteSasai*.
DeleteExtremely well worded ,expressive,lucid and unified.Loved it !God gifted..Keep it up sasai.
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